Hi Kanmani
Feeling great that I get to read this story... Thoroughly enjoyed ur writing style ..
Very crisp n neat writing...
All the characters were conceived n portrayed meticulously...all of them behaved as such with ur expressive writing n very very neat ,interesting dialogues....
Emotions were expressed precisely with more impact... that shows ur strength of ur writing skill.
Is this ur first work!!!!????
Then am amazed !!!!
All the ingredients added accordingly to create perfect flavour and taste for us readers...that's what I felt.
Eventhough the plot is usual,the way u rendered it makes all the difference...
No dragging ...no extra words to fill the page...
So kept our interest in tight grip..
Inbu@Inbavalli rocks...I loved her
Sathish,very vibrant n humorous
.they both took the story to another level n gave the readers joy..
Saveshvaran made others vibrate...his love for keerthanya ..wooow...semma romantic... enjoyed the pair n their love...
The Kandana!!!! What to say!! can't help but love them...kandan no1 stole my heart ...
The way u manipulate the characters Neelakandan and Manikandan with the satirical kandan no1&2 , brought out the opposite effect with readers as the story moves---this is a brilliant tool u used with brilliant dialogues n situations!!! Awesome ..!!!.u had all the control of the readers feeling n imparted all the emotions exactly as u conceived..!! My claps there...
Is this ur first work!!!? Then u have way to go ...
Awesome dr..continue with ur work..!!